Bloggie friends!!
Today I had my chipped tooth fixed.
Now I know as a wannabe writer of stories I ought to be able to describe as lyrically and poetically as I can a day at the dentist. So here is my writerly take on it.
Today I had my chipped tooth fixed.
Now I know as a wannabe writer of stories I ought to be able to describe as lyrically and poetically as I can a day at the dentist. So here is my writerly take on it.
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My day at the dentist:
OW. Ouchie. Ow. Ow. Ow. OWWWWW!!! That HURT! Please stop. No seriously. Put. That. Needle. Away.
My day at the dentist:
OW. Ouchie. Ow. Ow. Ow. OWWWWW!!! That HURT! Please stop. No seriously. Put. That. Needle. Away.
The end
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Charlie says: While you were at the dentist, I was hiding in your clothes.
Have a twirly Tuesday everyone!
39 comments:
lol- very poetic!
I'm with Charlie. Glad you got it fixed, but OW! and PUT THAT NEEDLE AWAY are spot on. Perhaps console yourself with a piece of courgette cake, if there's any left over.
I have a dental appt tomorrow AM, but it's just a regular cleaning. She's rough on my gums with those instruments of torture, though!
*ouch*
I just don't like going to the dentist...I just don't!
Helllllllllllllloooo sweet Charlie.
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Sorry for your dental trials, Kitty. I'll be going myself soon, but not for a chipped tooth. Still, I think my hygienist may be a demon in disguise.
I've lurked around your blog before, but I see you so often on all the blogs I frequent that I feel we should be proper bloggy friends.
My oh my, your poem made quite the point. Aint that the tooth.
Penny says, 'I wouldn't hide in Gary's clothes. I mean, do I want to be seen near some old dude's ridiculous flared jeans?'
That about summarizes my dentist trips, as well. Glad your tooth is all fixed up!
I hear you! I hate the dentist too. I hope you're feeling better soon.
CD
This made me LOL for real! I read it to my husband over the phone and he LOL'ed, too! Bless your heart, at least it's all fixed now.
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so glad you got your tooth fixed; how does it feel?
...it's the little things in life, isn't it?
Charlie might be heard " OW. Ouchie. Ow. Ow. Ow. OWWWWW!!! That HURT! " so he have to be in the safe place : )
I think that story would have benefited from some valium and alcohol. Wait...maybe it did...later!
Hope the hurting has stopped. GAH!
Is there anyone who likes going to the dentist? I doubt it! So glad you got the tooth fixed. Have a smooth Tuesday!!
great place to hide..we also like to hide inside our human wardrobe
I'm with Charlie. I'd much rather hide in your clothes closet than go to the dentist. Bad memories from my own chipped tooth at age 14
Sorry about the dentist. Yikes! Hope you're feeling better by now. *Hugs*
Ahhh, Charlie, you felt your mom's fear too.
Please tell your mom that she's more brave than our human who once punched the male dentist and shed tears on the female dentist years later!
Aargh - chips with everything.....
I've seen Charlie's behaviour before. A friend of mine used to hide in his wife's clothes when she was out shopping.
Hope your courgette-cake-hole is soon better.
Best wishes from Boonie and Mrs S
So Charlie totally played dress ups while you were away *grin* Hope your feeling better!!
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I hardly see you at all Charlie my friend!!
Yuck, we hate the dentist. Glad you survived.
LOL!
That sounds like me at the dentists ;)
Poor you and well described with just the right amount of dramatic tension.
Happy New Year! And, Charlie, get out your mum's clothes. You leave hair everywhere. She knows what you've been up to. Smile big, Old Kitty!
That's horrible! Your dentist shouldn't hurt you.
Charlie is so cute.
I've been putting off a root canal. I hope I can be half as poetic.
Your take on the dentist is about as poetic as it gets!
Charlie, we hide in closets too! Such fun!
The dentist was his usual gentle self then!!
Charlie we didn't know you were a cross dresser!! We like you best "au naturel".
Luv Hannah & Lucy xx xx
I am so phobic of the dentist! I won't tell you how many times I've hyperventilated right there in the chair! LOL. :-)
Hope you feel better soon! i just had gum surgery so I can empathize with you.
I think you summed it up beautifully...and so did Charlie!
*giggles helplessly* Oh, thank you. I needed that.
That is hysterical. That is a lot of Ouchs, that is for sure. I hate the dentist. HOpe you said some norty words to that dentist.
Charlie that looks like a good place to have a nap. Hope you both have a fun day.
Dentists are crummy, but we hope your tooth looks like new now. I'm sure Charlie welcomed you back home!
Oh no mum and my hated place..Hope you are ok.. Hugs GJ x
Our Mom knows how you feel!
Glad it is over..
~ Malachi
oh ouchies. I so feel for you. (but your poem made me giggle a little).
I hope the ow has gone
Good for you to have a dazzling smile back, but sad that it hurt.
Sounds very descriptive to me. Just like my visit to the dentist.
Great writing style! Seriously, to the point. Anyone who can write about a trip to the dentist and still manage to make me smile is great. Thanks.
Kat
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