What more can an Old Kitty ask for?
Well maybe not the critiques - harsh though they were! My latest work-in-progress elicited these responses from critique partners:
"I feel detached from the action and the emotion of the story"
"from time to time sentences are very long and cumbersome"
Sigh!!
Awww but look at these sleeping beauties and my lovely sandals....
p.s. Oh I cannot lie!! Charlie and Gumtree exhausted themselves from chasing and bopping and whapping each other for hours and hours! LOL!
Have a great week everyone!
