tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post6381584051170673304..comments2024-03-01T05:13:20.451+00:00Comments on Ten lives and second chances: The Average PersonOld Kittyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comBlogger42125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-3740682304335022482010-08-07T07:57:53.069+01:002010-08-07T07:57:53.069+01:00just wondered what Charlie's opinion of this v...just wondered what Charlie's opinion of this video is - personally I think the cat was fairly smart and definitely had an original approach to taps. <br /><br />http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HadYEieSKq0Jenny Woolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16881781466502273314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-11153206201139025642010-08-06T00:01:52.520+01:002010-08-06T00:01:52.520+01:00While you don't sound overly-enthusiastic, tha...While you don't sound overly-enthusiastic, that is a pretty darned good place to be for an early draft. The storytelling is part of the first draft, but the ART--THAT is in the rewrites (which I would not even THINK about until the book is done--get your writing legs steady, give yourself some time and space, and THEN come back to rewrite.Hart Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17599570189253229318noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-70697629769852444452010-08-05T21:02:58.887+01:002010-08-05T21:02:58.887+01:00Based on the structure of the marks a "good&q...Based on the structure of the marks a "good" = a "distinction".<br />They may not be "high distinctions" but still shouldn't be sneezed at.<br /><br />Charlie will sort it for you.Alhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15625543235578144620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-85014415970434257032010-08-05T19:37:00.715+01:002010-08-05T19:37:00.715+01:00this is good. this is what editing is for, then it...this is good. this is what editing is for, then it will be a grade A! :-DStephanie Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01005052525841312268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-39463963543991831442010-08-05T19:17:19.449+01:002010-08-05T19:17:19.449+01:00A B is very good and you should keep it up. I thin...A B is very good and you should keep it up. I think you have so much talent. Love Charlies picture.. HUgs GJ xx Angel Ginger Jasperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15332639287513279097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-89460033000161080392010-08-05T19:08:00.666+01:002010-08-05T19:08:00.666+01:00I think that is darn good! Remember, teachers oft...I think that is darn good! Remember, teachers often think they know it all, but don't tell them otherwise...you too Charlie!Brian's Home Bloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08809631273441407139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-87961297202476847922010-08-05T18:01:00.859+01:002010-08-05T18:01:00.859+01:00But thaat's pretty good, non? Anyway, novels a...But thaat's pretty good, non? Anyway, novels are so subjective...<br /><br />I'll help you scratch, too.Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-52117962873281680802010-08-05T16:56:32.158+01:002010-08-05T16:56:32.158+01:00hehehe, way to go, Charlie!!!!!!!
We think you di...hehehe, way to go, Charlie!!!!!!!<br /><br />We think you did really well in your course....and of course, the proof of the pudding is in what people that read your writing think of it....and you know we all love it!!!!<br /><br />And we love you and Charlie.SASS....Sammy Andy Shelly Sierrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08362426008984299956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-20999023188665271812010-08-05T16:42:01.908+01:002010-08-05T16:42:01.908+01:00... I think your excellent and
they look like v.go...... I think your excellent and<br />they look like v.good grades to me - are you a bit harsh on yourself old kitty? Remember grades are always marked up and down to suit a class average and make sure have a little celebration!Words A Dayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04423263654771820182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-90829245607145077662010-08-05T15:57:02.127+01:002010-08-05T15:57:02.127+01:00You will get that excellent in no time, honey!! Wi...You will get that excellent in no time, honey!! With Charlie by your side, awesomeness is possible. Nuff said.Amparo Ortizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05751368034351196820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-12681645480022532982010-08-05T15:50:10.860+01:002010-08-05T15:50:10.860+01:0078% is great! I hope your tutor is also giving you...78% is great! I hope your tutor is also giving you helpful feedback on how you can improve your grades even more.joanne foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12694158807826275846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-61424554602728810032010-08-05T15:23:13.588+01:002010-08-05T15:23:13.588+01:00Not to worry, that's why it's called '...Not to worry, that's why it's called 'art'. Keep at it, structure tends to be the last piece to get polished when I write.<br />Keep her spirits up Charlie, great works require time and will.Piphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720448450116459367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-88740714257518625902010-08-05T15:18:56.366+01:002010-08-05T15:18:56.366+01:00I give you an A for effort. I give Charlie an A f...I give you an A for effort. I give Charlie an A for scratching and napping. Chin up, baby! You are making progress!Bossy Bettyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12568355839499622409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-33102898426160787822010-08-05T13:50:01.082+01:002010-08-05T13:50:01.082+01:00Why all the sad faces? Look at all those goods! I ...Why all the sad faces? Look at all those goods! I doubt they give out too many excellents - that means there's no room for improvement, and we all have room for improvement!Susan Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02433408456603462774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-66070695025845336582010-08-05T13:37:44.112+01:002010-08-05T13:37:44.112+01:00I think those are very good marks also! Nothing to...I think those are very good marks also! Nothing to be disappointed over or discouraged about. Definitely well ABOVE average!<br /><br />(((Hugs))) to you and big smooches to adorable Charlie.Keahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06809655107065918944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-36974890205851554662010-08-05T13:26:08.367+01:002010-08-05T13:26:08.367+01:00I think a B is darn good. I admire you for just tr...I think a B is darn good. I admire you for just trying to write stuff. And now you know what areas you need to do a little work on. Isn't it all a learning process. <br />Good job Charlie attacking that couch. Looks like you are doing a great job. Have a great day.Marghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16571726966413507123noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-16479481206977900922010-08-05T13:16:10.512+01:002010-08-05T13:16:10.512+01:00Congratulations! We're sure that an A would h...Congratulations! We're sure that an A would have been far more appropriate!The Monkeyshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11850353509683423356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-62791954108060044332010-08-05T12:49:33.354+01:002010-08-05T12:49:33.354+01:00nothing wrong with those numbers, keep plugging aw...nothing wrong with those numbers, keep plugging away... with or without charlie's help ;)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-21611770125564317222010-08-05T12:44:38.230+01:002010-08-05T12:44:38.230+01:00We love the picture of Charlie - doesn't scrat...We love the picture of Charlie - doesn't scratching feel good.<br />Luv Hannah and Lucy xx xx<br />Jenn - 78% isn't a bad mark probably your tutor marks you in that way to keep you on your toes and to make you strive harder to become a great writer.<br />Take care and have a glass of wine.<br />Sue.Hannah and Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01349810117072020253noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-52542156022751424742010-08-05T11:25:42.251+01:002010-08-05T11:25:42.251+01:00Those were very good marks... but I suspect you...Those were very good marks... but I suspect you're a perfectionist!!<br /><br />Structure wise, my novel lost 20,000 words when Tor took it on due to structural changes they wanted to make, so I'm sure I'd have received a definite FAIL on that one! <br /><br />I'm also dyslexic, so FAIL and FAIL again.<br /><br />Keep writing Old Kitty, that's the key to all of it.<br /><br />xxx<br /><br />Oh forgot to say, Charlie's a brilliant editor, just tape a red pen to his paw and let him loose.BigFatLionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02622473027780378930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-25430898030501575962010-08-05T10:22:40.364+01:002010-08-05T10:22:40.364+01:00Grade B or 78% is pretty darn good! You've got...Grade B or 78% is pretty darn good! You've got a lot to celebrate. For a start you wrote the first three chapters and sent them for assessment, and you didn't have any bare passes or fails.Ellie Garratthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03731071128348213067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-72372717573961559842010-08-05T10:20:51.420+01:002010-08-05T10:20:51.420+01:00But those sound like good results!!! Well done! Th...But those sound like good results!!! Well done! Tho we would buy a Charlie novel.dArtagnan Rumblepurr/Diego Hamlet Moonfurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292794968160988264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-56022507921598585712010-08-05T10:06:23.488+01:002010-08-05T10:06:23.488+01:00For a work in progress you have a strong collectio...For a work in progress you have a strong collection of marks.<br /><br />Your novel doesn't have to be excellent (or even good) yet. That is what feedback is for!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-66361594992775895222010-08-05T10:00:12.252+01:002010-08-05T10:00:12.252+01:00Great marks Kitty for a WIP. Well done. Pat your...Great marks Kitty for a WIP. Well done. Pat yourself on the back. Now you now what to work on and your next draft will be super.Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07524878248746427258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3367997384893777621.post-31755257468843890132010-08-05T09:50:22.303+01:002010-08-05T09:50:22.303+01:00This is good ! Well done! And a bit mystified that...This is good ! Well done! And a bit mystified that you seem downcast :)Jenny Woolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16881781466502273314noreply@blogger.com